*As XWL Redemption opens we see Chris Sabin in the ring holding the X-Treme Title getting ready for his opening match
{Tony Chimel]
The Following contest is set for one fall introducing first already in the ring the X-Treme Champion Chris Sabin!
{Tony Chimel}
And Introducing his opponent from Gainesville Georgia weighing in at 215lbs. The Phenomenal One A.J. Styles!!!!!!!!
{Joey Styles]
A.J. Styles vs. Chris Sabin what a great match this should be Cole
{Michael Cole}
Yeah if this were 5 years ago and if Styles wouldn't have gotten beaten to shreds last week
*AJ and Sabin shake hands and the referee rings the bell
AJ and Sabin lock up in a clinch grappling for control before Sabin whips Styles and hits him with a wonderful arm drag he then picks him up but Styles fights back with a huge kick to the temple causing Sabin to spin around and fall to the ground
He then picks him up and gets hit with a Cutter from Sabin then gets hit with the Cradle Shock!!!!!
Sabin goes for the cover
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AJ powers the shoulder up but Sabin doesn't let up with a fury of punches and kicks but AJ fights back and sends Sabin into the corner Sabin fights back but then AJ hits the Styles Clash
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Sabin kicks out but he then hits the Cradle Shock!!!!!!!!
Both men are laid out the referee starts to count but Styles gets up tries to throw Sabin out but he holds onto the ropes Styles tries to clothesline him off the apron but he's sent flying outside
Sabin then goes for a moonsault off the apron but barely connects and both men are down again
the ref reaches a 6 count before Sabin gets in AJ gets up charges in but gets leveled with a Cradle Shock!!!!!!!!!!!
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[Joey Styles]
that was an amazing match
[Michael Cole]
Wow for the second week in a row AJ Styles is stupid enough to charge at his opponent only to get creamed
[Joey Styles]
Oh c'mon Cole that was a great match and he put up an amazing effort
*After the last segment, The fans are pumped and can't wait to see what's next. We fade into our next segment.... Where we see Carlito standing in a room with a cast on his arm and smiling...
[Carlito] Last week..... Last week on Redemption, I won my 5th match in a row since debuting here in XWL. It was of course, versus AJ Styles. AJ might've put up a good fight, and much more then I expected, but the inevitable result came through, with Carlito on top. There's not much more I can tell you guys about that much, but there is something else. After my match, Kane and Mr. Fn both came out and attacked both me, and AJ Styles. Now I understand you guys might be a little bit angry about your brother, Undertaker, being buried at Supremacy. But that's nothing to do with me or AJ, and attaking us, well, that's not cool. Any business you have with Ted, take it out on Ted, not on me, or anyone else. Kane and Fn, this might have not started out as a personal thing, but I'm taking it personal. And I will get payback for what happened last week. And to even worsen what happened, I had to celebrate my 5th win since my debut in a hospital bed.
*Carlito pauses for a moment, and the fans pay close attention to every thing he's already said, and will say.*
[Carlito] Kane... You think you're so cool putting me through a table right after a long match.... you think I'm weak because I couldn't fight back, well you're wrong. You're not cool Kane. You hadn't done anything at all and I had just fought a long hard match. If it had been me coming out after your match, I could've lifted you up, and done the backstabber through a table. Kane I know you're somewhere in the backstage now, and you hear what I'm saying. And I'm not afraid of you. Tonight, I'm gonna prove a point to you, one way or another. You see "Ministry of Darkness"... I remember Supremacy, when Ted DiBiase buried your older brother, Undertaker. The guy who plays monopoly... How much more uncool can you get? We all know Ted for who he really is, a failed version of his father, the true, Million Dollar Man. And if that's the type of guy whose going to bury the Undertaker, the far more successful of the 2 brothers of destruction, There's no way in hell someone as cool as... Carlito... Couldn't do the same to you Kane.
*Carlito pauses for a second thinking over what to say next/*
[Carlito] Now... Onto what happened to AJ Styles. AJ Styles, you're not cool in the smallest bit, you lost to Steen in a career match, but now what? You're back? What do you think this is? AJ you never should've came back after you lost, and I can only say you deserved every bit of what the Ministry did to you. My only regret, is not having taken you out myself. But Styles, you left for too long, and you've only just come back, you're not anybody now, so I can't be bothered with you.
*Carlito lifts up his apple with his good arm, and takes a big bite of it and chews it over, He swallows it then begins to speak again.*
[Carlito] Ministry, I don't have a clue why you chose me to attack, but it's the last choice you're going to have made, because you see, people who are cool, like Carlito are the ones who make the last choices. And my choice... Will be to send you down to the Undertaker, down to the deep depths underneath the Earth itself... I'll make both of you...
REST...
IN...
PEACE...
*Carlio really stresses those 3 lines, almost as if something had taken over him to say that, We then fade into our next segment and away from Carlito.*
Dusty Mid Card
Posts : 121 Likes : 4 Join date : 2011-07-10 Age : 31 Location : Germany
*The camera fades to the back showing Triple H who's making his way into the arena as the crowd in the arena gives him alot of heat.*
{Michael Cole} It's Triple H!!! Triple H is coming out here next to entertain all of us!!
{Joey Styles} Calm down, cole! Triple H has something to say and we will hear what it is, when Redemption comes back from our commercial break.
*The camera slowly fades to commercial while HHH is making his way to the ring.*
*Triple H's Theme blasts through the arena as the crowd starts to boo loudly. Triple H walks out slowly with a microphone in his hand and stays on top of the ramp. *
*He looks around as the crowd still boos him and insults him with "You suck" chants.*
*Triple H slowly raises up the mic and begins to speak.*
{Triple H} You wanna know what sucks? It's all of you! It's this entire arena! It's this whole city that sucks!
*The arena fills with boos as Triple H goes on to speak.*
{Triple H} Last week, your hometown hero John Cena compeated in a match for the United States Championship and you wanna know what happened? He lost! He's walking out here tonight with nothing but shame! John Cena was the wrong "man" to compeat for the Championship! It should have been me!
*Triple H takes a little break and then continues to speak.*
{Triple H} The management is still blind. I know that all of you can't take a look of the actual rankings for the Championships, but I can. The new list hasn't been released yet but let me tell you something about last weeks list. I was behind AJ Styles on an unacceptable 6th place. And who's Number 1? Carlito! Carlito is Number 1 because he faced people like Alex Riley and AJ Styles for the whole time. Tonight he's facing Chavo Guerrero... Really? My theory how Carlito gets to face all the nobodies is that he kissed so many asses, reaching that he gets to face all the nobodies till his career is over. Carlito, congratulations, you're streak is based on victories over jobbers. You should be proud of yourself because you will always be a jobber, too. Anyways, my point is that I'm working my ass off!! Ever since I returned to Redemption I had my wars with Mr. Fn and JBL, but it always ended the same way... my theme song blasted through the arena and I was the winner after a hard-fought match. Tonight, I'm facing the 3rd Powerhouse in a row. And tonight will damn well be my 3rd victory in a row ever since I returned to Redemption.
{Triple H} The Celtic Warrior against The Cerebral Assassin. Let's see if this is gonna be another war or not but one things a fact and that is me being the victor of that match. And you all better mark my words, I will walk out here everytime and I will talk about how overrated other people in XWL are, and I will defeat every huge guy there is untill I have reached that one goal that won't get out of my head anymore : A Match for the United States Championship. But till then I have to take a backseat for guys like AJ Styles or Carlito and that is the thing that makes me sick to my stomach. One day, I will face these guys. It's gonna be the same day where I knocked their heads off with a sledgehammer. Oh, and guess what? No one accepted my open challenge at Eye for An Eye yet. And let me tell you why... because no one out there has the balls to step into the ring with me, The Game, The King Of Kings, Triple H! The PPV after Eye for An Eye has the name of Monster Bash. And I promise each and everyone of you that I will become Champion at that night or even earlier. Soon, you will all bow down to your United States Champion, Triple H...
*The crowd boos loudly as Triple H's Theme hits while HHH stares kinda emotionless at the audience.*
{Michael Cole} That's a statement, Joey! Triple H just told each and everyone of us what he currently thinks of Redemption!
{Joey Styles} Triple H has been here for 2 weeks, it's way too early for him to get a Titleshot, it just won't get into his head.
{Michael Cole} Triple H thinks how he wants to think and he talks how he wants to talk, Joey. That's why he's so great, I don't even wanna mention of what he's capable in the ring! I don't wanna be Sheamus, right now!
{Joey Styles} Let's see how well Sheamus does against The Game. Sheamus vs Triple H later on tonight, folks! Our show is packed with great matches tonight so you better don't miss one minute of it!
*We come to our next segment/match.*
(P.S : I posted this 5 mins after the new list was released )
TheKrzyOne Main Eventer
Posts : 2282 Likes : 107 Join date : 2011-04-05 Age : 13
[XWL returns from a commercial break and after the camera moves about the arena for a bit before cutting to Michael Cole and Joey Styles at the announce table.]
{Styles} And we’re back folks and Redemption is picking up steam as this night rolls on.
{Cole} If you consider AJ Styles losing yet another match ‘picking up steam’ then I feel sorry for both him and you.
{Styles} Give him a break, sure Styles hasn’t found his groove since coming back, but in time he’ll be back on his game.
{Cole} He hasn’t ‘found his groove’? Get the hell out of here with those clichés. AJ Styles is a loser and he should’ve stayed retired when he lost to Kevin Steen instead of coming back and embarrassing himself further.
{Styles} What’s so embarrassing about coming back and trying to redeem yourself?
{Cole} Who has he been redeeming? He’s lost two straight matches in similar fashion. As far as I’m concerned, he should’ve stayed wrapped up in his mother’s arms where it was safe instead of trying to brave it out in the real world where he could barely survive.
{Styles} How could you be so quick to throw Styles under the bus? Everybody has a few bad nights. And at least he has a mother who would want to hug him, unlike you. Such shame you have brought upon the Cole family name.
{Cole} That was uncalled for don’t bring my family into this, we were having solid debate about AJ Styles’s declining career and then you throw a curve ball like that?
{Styles} The only thing uncalled for about this whole thing is why this company deems it necessary to make me babysit you when I’ve called entire pay per views by myself.
{Cole} You always bring that up as if that’s supposed to mean something. So much help you’re one man show proved to be when ECW crapped out, right? They have me here for a reason, and that’s so the people don’t get bored listening to you.
{Styles} You must get quite the view with your head that far up your ass.
[Chavo’s theme hits, and just like last week the crowd is split down the middle with their reaction. Chavo steps through the curtain with a microphone in his hand and paces back and forth across the stage while his music slowly fades out. Chavo clears his throat and raises the microphone to his lips and pauses for a second.]
{Chavo} …
{Styles} Are you serious? Is he really going to pull this same garbage again?
{Cole} You called his actions last week garbage, yet you give AJ Styles slack? XWL doesn’t tolerate biased announcing.
{Styles} And what was so great about Chavo coming out here and saying absolutely nothing?
{Cole} It’s about what he didn’t say that got people to do the talking for him. Everybody has been speculating about why Chavo has returned and what this could mean for XWL, but only the man himself can answer it.
{Styles} At the rate Chavo’s going, just coming out here and standing around like an idiot we may never find out.
Chavo smirks and walks down the ramp trading words with the fans in the front row as he makes his way down. He stops midway down the ramp and raises the microphone to his mouth once again.
{Chavo} There’s just no pleasing you people is there? You rage and throw fits and boo me out of arenas like the spoiled bunch of classless puntas you are when I come out here and speak my mind. But then you go and act like I slapped your mother when I actually hold back and restrain myself from saying anything that may hurt your feelings? iAy dios mio! Everything I do, everything I say, that affects you negatively is because you people bring it on yourselves by the being naïve bunch of ovejas that you always have been, and always will be because you refuse to see the world for what it actually is. There’s no yellow brick roads, or a happily ever afters. Life is all about getting screwed and getting ahead, and if one person has to get hurt so you can go up two rungs of the social ladder, then so be it. That’s the way things are supposed to be. That’s the way things really are.
{Chavo} But as much as I mock and criticize you people, I didn’t say anything last week because I was genuinely concerned. Me coming back and gracing you with my presence was one thing, and you all could barely handle that much less. But coming back, and then cutting a promo to top it all off? That would’ve been overkill. And even though I had your best interests in mind, the amount of negative backlash that came from it was disturbing. Hate mail arrived to my house, I received angry tweets and facebook messages. Hell people were even stupid enough to stop me on the street, as if I would actually give the light of day to someone beneath me. And the people stupid enough to get in my face, are the same ones who come out here and boo me because what I say goes against everything they were brainwashed to believe.
Chavo walks up the steel steps and stands on the apron to continue his speech.
{Chavo} But please, don’t take that as me being upset that after all these years you have yet to show me the respect that I deserve, not because I am a Guerrero, but simply because I am one the best. I’ve come to stop expecting such things from you, I know better than to expect anything better from you. But when I come back and the company disrespects me too? That’s when a line has to be drawn. I came here tonight and saw that I was booked against Carlito, and I laughed at first because I thought it was some type of joke. But reality sunk in and I realized that this was the company’s way of welcoming me back by giving me a guaranteed win? I don’t like having these nobodies fed to me as if I’m some rookie trying to make a name for myself. Carlito brags about being 5-0 since arriving to this company and yet the most interesting thing he’s done was get tombstoned through a table. And I know what’s going to happen once I hit the Gory Bomb or the Frog Splash and secure a victory for myself. Carlito is going to use what happened last week as an excuse for his loss, when the fact of the matter is his record is 5-1 before the bell even rings. Carlito is not on Chavo’s level, and he’ll learn that the hard way tonight.
[Chavo flips into the ring and poses while the boos rain down from the crowd.]
{Chavo} I didn’t come here to leave before I made my impact. I didn’t return to have another subpar run before disappearing out of the blue. And don’t you dare think that I made decision to lace up my boots for another go for you people, because I’m doing this for myself. I don’t expect this to be an easy climb to the top, nor do I expect to get there before my time. But I will get there, it’s inevitable, and you all will witness my journey… my rise to greatness, whether you want to or not. You may think the future is far away, but it’s only a matter of time before Chavo and Champion are uttered in the same breath and I….
[A ‘Cha-Ching’ sound is heard and Chavo looks behind him to see dollar signs on the titantron. Chavo grins as he rolls out of the ring and heads back up the ramp.]
{Chavo} It appears that you people have been given your money’s worth of Chavo’s time, and the last thing I’m going to do is grace you with my presence for longer than you deserve. You people want more Chavo, then you’ll have to earn it, but for now, our time has been cut short. But who knows, the night is still young, anything can happen.
[Chavo drops the mic and heads through the curtains leaving the audience to boo in his wake.]
Sable Mid Card
Posts : 314 Likes : -5 Join date : 2011-08-28 Age : 29 Location : Florida
This week I'm going to do a different format for my review. Instead of just reviewing three promos at the end of the week I'll review as many (hopefully all) of the non-diva promos (that's Sammi's job ) I'm going to post my expectations that I wrote up ahead of time (b4 reading the promos) followed by a small review. At the end of the week I will post a complete rating of each show based on all the matches seeing how they matched the expectations... Kind of confusing so if you don't get it.. you'll see ... Also my ratings will be out of 10 and in order to make it hard to get 10/10 i'm going to be kind of a hard ass with my expectations/ratings so ppl dont just get 10/10 every week.
Chris Sabin Vs AJ Styles
{{Expectations}}
Chris Sabin... won the Xtreme Title last week so I'm hoping that we maybe see a promo from him about that, but haven't seen any Sabin promos as of late so don't know what to expect... 1/10 AJ Styles... has shown a lot of effort as of late and is improving. Hope to see some more rise in promo quality because the effort is defiantly there... 1/10 Match.... Expect Styles to job to the new Xtreme Champion, Sabin without much build up seeing as he's out of Sabin's league ... 1/10
AJ Styles vs. Chris Sabin Write-Up...
First off I want to say that it's nice seeing effort in a write up of non importance. Most people would have just said.. "After a so and so match Chris Sabin hits a Cradle Shock and gets the pin".. for a match that doesn't have a special ending (such as a surprise attack, ect.). Nice use of commentary. Wasn't surprised to see Sabin come out victorious... 2/10
Carlito Vs Chavo Guerrero
{{Expectations}} Carlito... Has been on a streak but have faced a lot of people who didn't promo the week they faced him, plus he hasn't faced anyone with the promo capabilities as Krzy (from what I remember no offense to anyone who he's faced in the past) So it should be interesting how he matches up... 4/10 Chavo Guerrero... LOVED the promo last week building up Chavo's return, would have had me on the edge of my seat. Can't wait to see what you have in store this week... 6/10 Match.... Both of you are good promoers and it will be great to see the returning Chavo take on the undefeated Carlito!... 5/10
Carlito Interview...
I like how you started by bringing up the fact that you have been undefeated. Spoke about what happened last week, wish you went further into that... "I remember Supremacy, when Ted DiBiase buried your older brother, Undertaker. The guy who plays monopoly... How much more uncool can you get?" That had me :lol:ing. great line. Wish you talked about Chavo a little bit instead of AJ Nice way to end it with the Rest in peace ... 3.5/10
Chavo Promo...
Holy Shit, you didn't disappoint at all! Great Promo, super fun read. Nice commentary to start speaking about last week, and then out comes Chavo!! Opening paragraph was great, giving Chavo a personality, and was well written. "here’s no yellow brick roads, or a happily ever afters. Life is all about getting screwed and getting ahead, and if one person has to get hurt so you can go up two rungs of the social ladder, then so be it" That was great ^ Great explanation on why you didn't speak last week, agreed with it as well seeing as it made this return speaking promo soo much more anticipated then it would have been if you returned and went right into speaking. Great little paragraph about your opponent, Carlito. I liked how you (just like HHH) spoke on how he "brags about being 5-0 since arriving to this company and yet the most interesting thing he’s done was get tombstoned through a table." Also you had Chavo seem so much better then just some nobody returning you really have me believing (even without knowing Chavo's past in XWL) that he is already one of the best.. "Carlito is not on Chavo’s level, and he’ll learn that the hard way tonight." Guess we'll see!... 6.5/10
Sheamus Vs Triple H
{{Expectations}}
Sheamus... Well Sheamus is a big name both in WWE and from what I know has been in XWL so you have some big shoes to fill. Judging from your Hardy and Angelina promos I expect greatness!... 5.5/10 Triple H... You've made it clear in the past could promos that you have your eyes set on the U.S. Championship. Sheamus vs. Triple H is a great opportunity for promos, can't wait... 4/10 Match.... Both of you are good promoers and it will be great to see the returning Sheamus take on the King of Kings!... 7/10
Triple H Promo...
Nice promo here to build up the match between Sheamus and Triple H. Nice entrance and great way to start off about how Cena lost the U.S. title match and how it should have been you. I like how you speak about Carlito saying how he has only been facing Jobbers (like Chavo basically said) and how you've faced Mr. Fn, and now Sheamus but unlike Chavo you categorized Guerrero under the list of jobbers, so should be interesting if Chavo has anything to say about that! Going to be keeping an eye on Chavo, Carlito, and Triple H because once this whole Steen/ Miz thing is over I can see one of them or Cena getting a real shot at the title... 3.5/10
TheKrzyOne Main Eventer
Posts : 2282 Likes : 107 Join date : 2011-04-05 Age : 13
This guy gave me a 6.5, it makes me want to work harder, but I'm so damn lazy. Thanks for the review Jerry, appreciate it. And I didn't even see that Triple H took a shot at me. That'll be dealt with later.
This guy gave me a 6.5, it makes me want to work harder, but I'm so damn lazy. Thanks for the review Jerry, appreciate it. And I didn't even Triple H took a shot at me. That'll be dealt with later.
Loved the promo, and will be keeping a close eye on Chavo promo's in the future tbh. Also 6.5 is good, im rating everyone low so that I don't just give all the really great promos 10/10 every time. aka, Zander, David, or Shuggz at their best would be like a 9.5... 10/10 = almost impossible
P.R Son Legend
Posts : 6977 Likes : 97 Join date : 2011-02-03 Age : 31
I don't just give all the really great promos 10/10 every time. aka, Zander, David, or Shuggz at their best would be like a 9.5... 10/10 = almost impossible
DAMN STRAIGHT
Kid118118 New Talent
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Subject: Chris Sabin Promo Mon Sep 12, 2011 9:49 am
**After a video with the results of last weeks Extreme title match the new champ Chris Sabin shows up on the big screen**
{Sabin} I have come here to tell you guys Ive put together a little video package for you fine fans in this arena tonight so Just sit back and enjoy.
The video starts off with A few words saying "Chris Sabin's road to the gold"...A few chuckles are heard from the fans.
{Sabin} When I first started here in XWL I had no respect I was lazy all I cared about was the fans....getting laid and getting paid.
{Sabin} And when I didn't get laid or get paid I would try and remember the good old days
{Sabin} The good old days where I had a challenge I could be who I wanted to be I wasn't prepared to just sit back and wait for great opportunities to pass bye I would take the chance and turn it into something real, but a few weeks ago I was a mess I let all the cameras and lights get in head this was me 3 weeks ago.
{Sabin}
Oh yeah and this but this was kinda funny.
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{Sabin}
Sorry Vickie but your office shouldn't be that close to the bathroom.........Moving on I was at the end and just when I thought all was lost my best friend Alex Shelley found.
{Sabin} He taught me to be the guy I used to be he built me back up and after a few weeks he gave me a shot at the Extreme championship I went out there to prove something that night I wanted to rove that I could still be a champion and hang with the big guys,and I owe it to you Alex thanks for turning this frown...
{Sabin} Upside down
**The video ends and Chris Sabin appears again and the big screen and begins to talk**
{Sabin} Now I hope you good people enjoyed that,I just have one last thing to say this week I beat the phenomenal AJ Styles I walked into that match to make a statement and that statement was to show everybody that if you challenge me for this title you better prepare yourself for more than a fight you better prepare yourself for a war.
Chris Sabin... won the Xtreme Title last week so I'm hoping that we maybe see a promo from him about that, but haven't seen any Sabin promos as of late so don't know what to expect... 1/10 AJ Styles... has shown a lot of effort as of late and is improving. Hope to see some more rise in promo quality because the effort is defiantly there... 1/10 Match.... Expect Styles to job to the new Xtreme Champion, Sabin without much build up seeing as he's out of Sabin's league ... 1/10
Chris Sabin Video Package and Promo...
I liked this promo because it was clever and original. It was nice to see you give an explanation of our new Xtreme Champion's past and what you plan for the future. Nice way of bringing up the match with AJ Styles to further prove that you're prepared to defend your title against whoever, whenever. Hoping to see Sabin bring back some prestige to the Xtreme Title through storylines/promos ... 4/10
TheFilthParade Main Eventer
Posts : 3283 Likes : 70 Join date : 2011-02-03 Age : 32 Location : Halifax, England
The sold out Boston crowd raise to their feet quicker that a hiccup at the sound of The Rocks theme blaring through the speakers, everybody is on their feet and the atmosphere is electric as The Peoples Champion bursts through from behind the curtain...
The Rock makes his way down to the ring at a rather quick pace, high fiving the crowd all the way before finally climbing in the ring, he taunts on the top rope for a while...
He finally jumps down and walks over to the side to grab a mic, he takes a look into his sea of followers before raising the mic and getting into an all to familiar position to speak...
The Rock: Finally! The Rock! Has come back! To Boston! Which means finally! The Rock! Has come back! To Redemption! Which means that tonight, right here, live in front of the millions!
Crowd: AND MILLIONS!
The Rock: And millions of The Rocks fans, he will go ONE on ONE with Ted DiBiase! A match that you have all been wanting to see for months! A match that the people have been dying to see, a match that The Rock has been dying to fight and a match that Ted DiBiase has been begging to take place, tonight he gets his chance to prove that he can hang with the absolute BEST this company has to offer. Tonight will be just a small preview of what awaits the world inside of the elimination chamber, tonight we will go out there and wage a war, punches will be thrown, spines will be busted, elbows will be dropped and when it's all said and done, when the dust has settled and the smoke has cleared The Rock will be standing tall, standing victorious, standing ready to go to Eye for an eye and whoop the other 4 candy asses unlucky enough to be placed inside the steel with The Great One!
The Rock: Last week on Breakdown The Rock came out and told the world that he would do two things, first, he would beat Cody Rhodes, second, he would walk into the elimination chamber The World Heavyweight Champion and just as sure as Vickie Guerrero loves a little piece of The Coach on the side! Just as sure as Michael Cole goes home every night, makes a microwave dinner, turns on some desperate housewives and cries into his pillow! Just as sure as Chris Jericho goes through seven suits a week due to the sheer amount of self soiling is just as sure sure that The Rock will walk OUT still, World Heavyweight Champion! So let The Rock re-fresh your memories, last week he did in fact beat barbies boyfriend Cody Ken Rhodes which means that he's half way through his promise, now all he's gotta do is win the elimination chamber!
The Rock: And The Rock has great news heading into the big main event, last week The Rocks best friend Mick Foley announced to the world that the lucky person to enter the chamber number one would be the Jabroni Beating lalalalow! Pie eating, Trailblazing, Eyebrow raising, Heart Stopping, Elbow Dropping, Crystal Clear, Have no fear, Take your foot off the brake and slam it on the gas, always ready to whoop some ass peoples champ, THE ROCK! and who will be joining him at number two in the chamber? Why it's none other than the Straight Edge, Strudel Wedged, In his ass, Zero class, Rub on tattoos, Holes in his shoes, Puberty beard! Never loved and Never feared! Peoples Chump, CM........PUNK!
The Rock: That's great news for you people because that means that you'll finally get to see The Rock shove his boot so far up CM Punks ass that he'll be able to tie The Rocks laces with his intestines, it's great news for The Rock because he'll finally get to shut him up once and for all and it is of course good news for CM Punk because he'll finally get that one on one ass whooping he seems to crave so damn badly. Now Punk, The Rock doesn't like you, in fact you could even go as far to say that The Rock hates you, but that's already known to the world, it's well documented so The Rock wont go into why yet again, but let The Rock just say this, when we step in there and go eye to eye, toe to toe, man to man The Rock will not hesitate to beat you, hard and quick. So if you want a chance of winning and more importantly if you want The Rocks respect then you better have a plan for going in there with The Great One because if you don't, then The Rock will run you over and move on to the other three participants...
The Rock: Now The Rock doesn't give a damn what order they come out in next, it doesn't matter to him which order they are beaten in because quite frankly they all stand the same chance as Mick Foley in a bikini contest, absolute zero. Alberto Del Rio could step out of his little pod next, or maybe he'd rather stay in the pod, we all know he is a huge fan of tight spaces, maybe he'll feel more at home in there. Del Rio walks out next, BAMN Rock Bottom and for the nine millionth eight thousandth three hundredth and tenth time The Rock will have beaten George Lopez! Then after that, after that maybe Ted DiBiase will step out of his pod, pass go, collect a big fat can of know your role, come in to the ring with his mouth firmly shut and get his third generation ass handed to him by the third generation champion! After Ted has been disposed of out will come Chris Jericho, for the first time in months The Rock will be face to face with the former World Champion....
The Rock: The Rock will look at Chris Jericho with the eye of the tiger, the pride of a lion and the heart of a champion and across from him, Chris Jericho will look back with tears rolling down his face, piss rolling down his legs and a look of fear in his eyes so intense that it only happens every once in a blue moon when Vickie Guerrero calls him up to her office for their, buisiness meetings....Then The Rock will hit Chris Jericho with a spine buster so forceful that John the popcorn guy in row triple Z will be knocked on his ass, The Rock will bounce to his feet, take of his armband, run those ropes and hit that two bit Canadian bitch with the single most electrifying move in all of entertainment!
The Rock: Then and only then will the chamber rise, The Rock will grab his World Heavyweight Championship and he will celebrate with the people like only The Rock knows how, you see wha......
The Rock is cut off by an unfamiliar theme. Justin Gabriel walks out onto the stage microphone in hand. To a huge reaction of boo's from the audience. Gabriel raises up the microphone, and his music cuts off
[Justin Gabriel] I think you are forgetting someone, Rock. You're forgetting a former united states champion, and the biggest threat inside that Elimination Chamber... The boo's continue from the audience as Gabriel walks down the ramp, and gets into the ring.. going Face to Face with The Rock, The Rock looks at him for a moment with a completely straight face, genuinely wondering who he is..
The Rock: Does anybody wanna explain to The Rock why he was just interrupted by one of the sorriest excuses for a theme he has ever heard? Then, then this developmental jabroni walks out to the peoples ring during The Rocks time? You, kid, do you even understand the importance of the situation? This isn't a house show, this is Redemption, live, The Rock was in talking about the chamber and then you, you come out here with you're goofy little two dollar haircut and a voice like a broken record and you tell The Rock he's forgetting someone?
The Rock: You see that's where you're wrong, The Rock didn't forget no body! The Rock knows everyone! The Rock knows Alberto Del Rio, The Rock knows CM Punk, The Rock knows Ted DiBiase, The Rock knows Chris Jericho, The Rock knows Lilian Garcia, hey mamma, how you doing? Save it for after the show baby! The Rock knows Mitch the camera man, give us all a little wave Mitch! Yeah, there you go, The Rock knows Joey Styles and The Rock sure as hell knows Michael Cole! Hey Cole, how you been doing lately? The Rock hasn't seen you in a while, stand up and tell this Justin Beiber wannabe how you're doing
Cole Reluctantly gets to his feet and picks up a mic to speak to The Rock....
Cole: I've been doing just fine Rock, brilliant in fact, did you know that i'm the number one broadcast journalist now? That I hold the highest prestige avai....
The Rock: The Rock only asked how you were doing Michael Cole we don't need your entire life story, so here's what you can do, you can tell everyone here, who do YOU think will leave Eye for an eye as The World Heavyweight Champion?
Cole: Without a doubt in my mind it will be.......
The Rock: IT DOESN'T MATTER WHO YOU THINK!
Cole sits back down in his chair very pissed off as the entire crowd laugh along with The Rock who turns his attention back to Justin Gabriel...
The Rock: No, The only thing that matters, is that you came out here acting like you've got a set of testicles, interrupting The Rocks show when not a damn person in this arena knows or even cares who you are, so you comb your hair to the side, tuck those imaginary balls back between your legs and scoot on out of here before The Rock grabs your can of hairspray, shiiiiines it up real nice, turns that sum' bitch sideways and shoves it so far down your throat that the next time you fart Cody Rhodes will be catching a sniff of your ass to give him that.....funny feeling....
*Justin Gabriel once again cuts of The Rock*
[Justin Gabriel] I've Had it with you dis-respecting me. For the last few week you've done nothing but talk trash about me, and not show me the respect that I DESERVE. Ever since I came to XWL nobody has showed me respect. I don't care about your history or your legacy, Rock. That does not give you the right to disrespect me. I've accomplished more in the 6 Month, I've been here in XWL than others have in the past 2 years. I've beaten some of the top stars in this company, and took the others to their limits. I've been one of the fastest rising, young superstars in this company. I'm above everybody else when it comes to showing what I can do in this ring. You come out here every week, and all you do is use that microphone to get the attention, to get you loved by these morons. But, I'm not about that Rock... I'm not about giving these idiots what they want. I'm here for me, and only me and that's what make me the best. And I'm not going to let all my hard work be ruined by the likes of you, I've worked too hard for some old, past it, money grabbing,lame excuse of a movie star like you ruin it.
The Rock: Who in the name of blue hell pissed in your cornflakes this morning? Of course The Rock knows who you are, The Rock just likes to have a little fun, but since it's clearly your time of the month then The Rock will be serious with you for a moment, if you think for one single solitary second that coming on out here and bitching about how you're the fastest rising superstar this company has to offer is gonna get you anywhere then you may as well crawl back into whatever hole you came from. You think The Rock is out here for the attention? You're damn right The Rock is out here for the attention but let The Rock say this, when it's all set in stone when The Rock is long gone, when your monkey ass is long gone, who is gonna be the one who leaves behind something that matters? Something that people remember? Is it gonna be the little pre-pubescent bitch that can't even grow a beard without looking like a damn peadophile or is it gonna be the man who came to this company and after four short months broke records, became the fastest champion in the history of our company, electrified the crowd weekly and left everyone watching going, damn, that guy was good!
The Rock: So the next time you decide to come out here and run your mouth about what you DESERVE then maybe you should take a quick look back at what you've done and realize that you DESERVE nothing! This isn't the United States Championship, this isn't some childrens toy, now that you're up here you are hanging with the very best this company has to offer and how do you make your big impact? You come out here with some half assed claims and poor excuses, The Rock doesn't care if you're a former United States Champion, Intercontinental Champion, hell The Rock doesn't give a giraffes ass hair if you're a former president! You wanna make an impact? You wanna get noticed? You want The Rock to take you seriously? Well then it couldn't be any simpler tinkerbell, three simple words that The Rock has said time and time again.....
The Rock leans right into Justin Gabriels face to the point they are almost touching before lifting the mic again
The Rock:.....Just........Bring........It!
[Justin Gabriel] Consider it....brought.
Justin Gabriel drops the microphone, and exits the ring and walks back up the ramp, not talking his eyes of The Rock who looks confused at Gabriels statement, both men keep an intense glare fixed on each other as Redemption goes to commercial break
Ted Dibiase... Expecting another great promo from Ted, especially since he has capitalized on the fact that it is his dream to become the WH Champion and now he's going one on one against The World Heavyweight Champ, The People's Champ.. The Champ.. The Rock... Expecting great things... 9.2/10 The Rock... Interested to see who The Rock butts heads with this week, especially seeing as he is on Redemption which is filled with heel EC competitors... 9.2/10 Match.... Ted and Punk/ Rock and Punk had some issues last week, so am thinking he might get involved. Also gonna be fun seeing the only 2 faces go one on one and if any of the heels who are out to get both Ted and Rock interfere. Am REALLY looking forward to the Breakdown Main Event as well so will be interesting to see which one gets the higher rating.... 9.5/10
Rock/ JG Promo...
Great descriptive entrance seeing as only The Rock can enter like...well The Rock "A match that you have all been wanting to see for months!" so true, and nice way to build up the Main Even match in this promo. Loved a lot of the lines you used throughout this promo, very clever. Nice way of speaking about how Rock and Punk will be starting off in the EC and building that up. I like how you mention everyone in the EC.. except JUSTIN GABRIEL.. JG then comes out and The Rock makes me once again.. and again.. and again.. so you comb your hair to the side, tuck those imaginary balls back between your legs and scoot on out of here.. SEE!! Nice use of pics, the cole one was great. Nice responses to JG, loved how you talked about knowing the camera man over JG was funny and clever.. great promo...9.3/10
Alberto Del Rio Vs Justin Gabriel
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ADR... Haven't seen much of Del Rio lately... 0/10 JG... Have been loving the JG promos as of late. Hoping to see him interact with another competitor of the EC... 7/10 Match.... Thinking it will be a pretty normal match... 5/10
JG Part of The Rock Promo
I'm really glad you talked about not being forgotten in this EC because JG is one of the newer superstars in the WH Rankings and title run. Nice to see JG hold his own against The Rock on the mic Thought that Rock was going to get the last word but Consider it Brought, as simple as it was, was a great way to end it... 6.4/10
*Justin Gabriel stands over Alberto Del Rio as the ref holds his hand up in victory.*
{Cole} What a victory for The South African Sensation!
{Styles} Justin Gabriel complained to the Rock how he wasn't getting the atte-
{Cole} Let me stop you right there! Justin Gabriel was most certainly not complaining, he was stating the facts! Week after week Justin Gabriel puts his body on the line and amazes us with his gravity defying 450 Splash, and what does he get in return??
{Styles} A shot at the World Heavyweight Title at Eye for an Eye?
{Cole} .. Well that's besides the point! All these people are talking about is The Rock and CM Punk! Well unlike Punk or Rock, Justin Gabriel can actually climb up the turnbuckle without worrying about his knees giving way! Gabriel is in his prime, and is without a doubt the most talented in ring competitor in the Chamber capable of the impossible!
{Styles} Ha! Well I doub-
*Styles is interrupted as the arena grows sickening quiet.*
{Cole} What the...
*The camera zooms in on the tron and we see the cause of the hush.*
{Cole} Is that Lita?
*The camera pans out and we see Beth Phoenix standing over her with a devilish grin.*
{Beth} Earlier tonight I was told that I was supposed to face Kelly Kelly on Breakdown.. Now even you all should be smart enough to realize that match will NOT happen. I packed my bags and decided to take a trip to Redemption to see if Vickie would book me against some real competition. So she pulled some strings and offered to book me against Lita if it was alright with her. I was overjoyed to be given the opportunity to face a competitor as talented as Lita. So Vickie called Lita into her office to run it by her and guess what she said.. She didn't feel up to having a match on her day off, said that I wasn't worth her time... Now I understood that she was just putting up a front as the veteran diva, and that the reality was that she didn't want to be tested against real competition instead of the disgraces of divas here on Redemption that she usually faces. So I let it go, out of respect for what she's done for this industry. But then I overheard her talking to a bunch of the other Redemption Divas backstage, saying how she thought it was a joke that Vickie would even think of... how'd she say it.. "Putting a legend up against a wannabe".. Well you can only imagine my reaction.. I walked right up to her and smacked the red right out of her hair. Of course all her "friends" scattered upon seeing me so it was just me and her.. like it should have been in the ring tonight.. And well.. lets just say that I proved that I'm far more than a "wannabe".. and we won't be seeing Lita in the near future...
*Beth laughs before turning to walk away before stopping for a moment and turning back around*
{Beth} Oh and Kaitlyn... Good luck tonight...
*Beth leaves as we cut back to the commentators*
{Cole} Wow... well it looks like Beth Phoenix made quick work of the legendary Lita! Jeez
{Styles} Talking about Legends, guess who's going to be our special guest host next week here on Redemption!!?!?
{Cole} The Miz?
{Styles} No you idiot, he's a regular superstar here..
{Cole} The Miz is anything but regular Joey!
{Styles} Well so is our guest host for next week...
*On the Tron..*
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{Cole} It can't be...
{Styles} It is!! Bret "The Hitman" Hart!! Here on Redemption next week! I can't wait!!
*The crowd's thunderous cheers cause the children in the audience to cover their ears.*
{Styles} Wow! These cheers couldn't get any louder!
*Styles is proven wrong as the crowds actually do indeed grow as Bret's face appears on the Tron live from his home!*
{Bret Hart} That's right everyone, The Best there is, the best was, and the best there ever will be is going be hosting the best damn episode of Redemption to ever air in the history of the XWL! Next week I'm going to give the people what they want...
*The crowd starts to chant "We Want Bret"*
{Bret Hart} And next week you'll get him!
*The crowd's cheers drown out Cole and Styles as Bret's theme sounds off*
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Homicide Ey, guys what’s up! Let me get straight to the point with what I need to say. Now I know I’m an up coming superstar here in XWL but let me tell you something I am going to be one of the biggest superstars here.
Homicide I mean come on lets face it I will out show a lot of no talent superstars here. That would be hmmmm let me count.
Starts to count on his fingers
Homicide O yea just about everyone on this show. Now don’t get me wrong there is some talent here on this show like: A-Rye, CM Punk, Justin Gabriel, Sheamus and the Miz. Let’s face it I should just put my name in with those superstars.
Homicide But never mind that for now I’m just gonna do what I do best and that’s win my matches that I get assigned. Starting with El Generico and so on. I will be dominating on this show while my pal Hernandez dominates on breakdown. O and I almost forgot I ran into someone at the gas station on my way here and thought he should come and talk on the show before he heads to the airport and gets to where he needs to be. So just sit back and let me introduce my boi my friend and the other half of LAX Hernandez.
Hernandez appears and heads towards the ring as the crowd cheers
Hernandez Hola Homicide what’s up bro. How ya been it’s good to see that your representing on redemption. So tell me something what took you so long to get back into wrestling.
Homicide Well you know me got things to do. Got places and people to see. But that’s not what matters anyway. What matters now is that I am here and I am ready to dominate these no talent superstars.
Hernandez Hold on! Hold on! Hold on! Do you really have what it takes to beat them.
Homicide What are you trying to say?
Hernandez All I’m saying is that you haven’t been in the ring for awhile can you still fight with the dogs in the ring.
Homicide Yes I can and you know it. Come on bro you know you can’t be playing around like that. You know that I still got it that gringo killer will destroy anyone that comes across it.
Hernandez Haha I know well hey I gotta go I gotta catch my flight. Sorry to leave you but I gotta get to my show and start dominating again. Now that’s
Subject: XWL Redemption: 9/11/2011 - 9/18/2011 
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Carlito's feelings are hurt
