*The show opens and as the theme song for Breakdown plays throughout the arena, fireworks go off causing the crowd to erupt in cheers as the camera cuts from a panning of the crowd to the announcers table where we find Jim Ross and Jerry "The King" Lawler..
{J.R.} Hello everyone, and welcome to Breakdown! I'm Jim Ross and this here is my partner "The King" Jerry Lawler! And we are coming off the final stop on the road to Final Stand IV, Over The Limit! And what a show it was.
{King} You are absolutely right J.R.! We saw some of the best matches we've seen from these men whether it was John Cena and The Rock engaging in a inhumane I Quit match, Gabriel taking on the XWL Champion Wade Barrett in a Last Man Standing Match we some of the most brutal action you can see! But you have to remember that Gabriel also cost Barrett the Intercontinental Title against Ziggler.
{J.R.} I agree. At Over The Limit, John Cena overcame The Rock by forcing him to quit following a STFU with the assistance of handcuffs, Rock fought as long as he could but when DiBiase asked him one more time if he quit, he complied thus ending the match. But that wasn't the end of it, Rock apparently thought that DiBiase somehow cost him the contest, and proceeded to berate him following the contest which led DiBiase to snap and destroy The Rock, and we are not sure about The Rock's condition but we will get an update on him as soon as possible.
{King} And what a match was the main event! Justin Gabriel brought his A-Game as did our World Champion, but in the end both men weren't willing to stay down and led to a death defying move which put both men down for a 10 count, giving us no winner and thus having Barrett retaining the championship.
{J.R.} Another match at OTL, was one I was looking forward to was Austin vs Storm, which ended when the men started to brawl up the ramp giving us a double count out, but once again Storm left Austin lying out on the stage following a devastating Eye of the Storm onto the steel after a brutal contest that left Storm bloodied, but this time I will give credit where credit is do, when the fight was brought to him Storm fought back.
{King} Damn right he did. Unfortunately for Austin that meant another evening of icing his back and getting checked on the medical team. He cleared to compete but you have to think that if these men meet in the ring again that Austin will be forced into an early retirement.
{J.R.} And speaking of that match I'm getting word that.....
*Storm walks onto stage to a chorus of boo's, from the moment his music hit the fans knew they were in for a segment that they didn't want to hear.
{J.R.} This man right here has been beaten down by Austin, but is one of the few to claim he came back in such a fight and did even more damage to "The Rattlesnake", he may be cocky and his opinions maybe deluded and crass but he is a tough son of a bitch.
*He stands on the stage for a moment where you can see moonshine on his tron video before proceeding down the ramp to the ring.
*Storm steps into the ring as the boo's continue.....
*He walks to the ring announcer and asks for a mic.
{King} I wonder what he's gonna say?!
{J.R.} I'll give you two guesses..
*He raises the mic to his mouth and just before he begins to speak he lowers the mic again. He begins to look around the ring and deep into the crowd of which is booing him out of the building.
*Storm finally stops looking around and focuses on what he came out to do, he lifts the mic to his lips and begins speaking.
{James Storm} So this is what it feels like? This is what a complete bad-ass feels like. You people just hate it because it was at the expense of your hero "Stone Cold" Steve Austin. You people just don't appreciate when you have the future in front of you and y'all hate it because you know it's true. At Over The Limit I once again decimated Steve Austin to the point he needed assistance. He had to be helped to the medical area where they were making sure he could walk cause' of his ole back just like the fossil he is. No one gives a damn about Austin 3:16 anymore and you have more than shitty luck, you have me as an enemy and that's something I don't wish on any man. God created three things that cause normal men trouble.... women, beer, and James Storm. Women screw you then screw you over, beer gets you messed up then gets you messed up, and James Storm kicks your ass then kicks your ass harder! Not a single man on this planet can stand in this ring with this Cowboy and that includes Barrett, that includes Gabriel, that includes Dolph Ziggler, and that sure as hell includes my opponent tonight The Undertaker!
{James Storm} He calls himself the American Bad-ass but he has never stood across the ring from "The Cowboy" James Storm, if anyone is an American Bad-ass it's yours truly. And tonight Taker will be just another legend that I take down joining the list with Austin. Undertaker I don't care how many Wrestlemanias you went undefeated at, I don't care that you're a however many time World Champion all I care about that's related to you is when I Super Kick you that you don't get blood on my boots or scuff the bottom of them with your chin. When they told me I was facing you I went out and drank myself into the next morning, and not from fear or depression, but from partying so hard that I had the week off.
{James Storm} But onto Final Stand IV, I did as Rhodes wanted at Over The Limit but due to the result of the main event I can only assume that I won't be getting my reward and that's fine because my consolation prize was a 12 pack purchased myself and the satisfaction of knowing that Austin wasn't enjoying the same thing as me but instead lying on a trainers table making sure he's even okay to drive his truck back to the hotel rooms. So at Final Stand it looks as if I won't be in a match and that's fine with me because if that's the case then I'll make my impact felt there just like X-Treme X-man and Over The Limit and make it a point that James Storm cannot be denied what is rightfully his and that's the title of the best performer on Breakdown and in XWL. Not a single person in on my level, no is as sick, talented, efficient, or can hold alcohol like me!
*Just in the middle of Storm's sentence the crowd begins chanting "WE WANT AUSTIN!" and a dueling chant with it "SHUT STORM UP!". This begins aggravating Storm as he finishes his sentence about how he's the best.
{James Storm} Week in and week out you people chant for Austin while I'm talking and it gets old after awhile. You all know that he is no match for me. The two times we have met in the ring I sent him packing with the Eye of the Storm both times. Once through that minitron up there, and then spine first onto the steel on that there stage up there. And I know how much that hurts, so trust me in saying that don't be surprised when he comes out he later for his match if he limps and gets in the ring only to get his ass handed to him by Scott Hall and then has to be stretchered out again. When I dealt out that damage I made sure it was long term so that he would never forget who put him out of wrestling! Everytime he tries to lay down but his back is to stiff and painful to sleep it was James Storm! When he tries to workout but collapses from pain that was James Storm too! Hell even when he tries to sit on the toilet and it takes him 30 minutes to take that squat, I made that happen! And whoever get in my way will suffer just as much.
{James Storm} Alright I'm wrapping this up, "Stone Cold" Steve Austin you have had many historic moments in your career. Whether it was defeating Shaw Michaels at Wrestlemania with Mike Tyson, winning the Royal Rumble 3 different times, your encounters with The Rock and Mr. McMahon, and of course the classic King of the Ring leading to the creation of the phrase Austin 3:16, but here's what I'm going to do for ya Steve. And that's add a couple new chapters to your history and that moment is your retirement and the moment when you helped spawn my new catchphrase which is Storm 3:16 says SORRY! ABOUT YOUR DAMN LUCK!
*Storm then drops the mic onto the ground, and his theme hits as the crowd begins to boo him as he walks up the ramp soaking in the boo's with a giant grin on his face. The camera once again cuts to the announcer's table...
{J.R.} Well Storm had many good points in what he said but I don't thinking he should be sending those chapter he wrote for Austin's book to publishers just yet, because Stone Cold most likely has some editing to do.
{King} Although corny, that joke is accurate. Storm has shown he can go but Austin is one of the greatest to step in the ring. We'll have to see how Austin responds. Anyway, Breakdown will return after this commercial break!
*Breakdown returns from a commercial break. The camera scans the arena and sees the faces of the XWL audience, which are filled with joy after a blockbuster of a Pay-Per-View Over The Limit was. Then out of nowhere...*
*AJ walks out from behind the curtain, without any pyro or his signature pose on the stage.*
*He just stands there and scans the crowd from left to right, who are split down the middle with half of them cheering while the other half booing, before continuing his way down to the ring.*
*Many kids in the crowd extend their hands towards AJ, only to get ignored. AJ continues his walk down the ramp, while the audience cheers him for the beatdown Fortune received at the hands of the nWo at Over The Limit and the other half, who still haven't forgotten Fortune's assault on Ted DiBiase continue to boo AJ. None of this is getting to him as he seems to have blocked out the boos and the cheers.*
*He reaches the ringside area and walks over to the bell keeper. Upon reaching said area, he gets a mic, walks over to the steel steps and begins ascending them. Now on the apron, AJ looks at the audience one last time before entering the ring and standing directly in the center as he begins to speak.*
{AJ Styles} I was living my life with closed eyes. It wasn't until last week on Redemption that my eyes were finally opened. I saw what this XWL Universe really stands for, they are just a group of manipulating puppeteers who control the people they cheer. They make the superstars in the back fall into a false sense of security and when they slip up, these hypocritical “fans” start booing said superstars because they are done with them. They don't entertain them anymore, then they move on to the next target, then the next. It's a never-ending cycle that needs to be broken, and Fortune are going to be the ones to do it. This “Universe” is the disease and Fortune is the cure.
{AJ Styles} At Over The Limit a travesty took place. A group of cowards attacked Fortune before the match could start, like a bunch of rabid dogs. The so-called “New World Order” are nothing but a bunch of bullies who try to hold on to their glory days. The fact of the matter is, they know that they can't keep up with the future of this company, so they have to resort to the numbers game to make them feel better about the unforeseeable future. A lot of people claim that we had what happened at Over The Limit coming, that's where you're wrong... and here's why, we completely destroyed Ted DiBiase on Redemption, not because we hate him, no of course not, we did it to make a statement. A statement that Fortune will not pandering to the fans any longer, a statement that Fortune refuses to kiss the fans ass to make them feel better about their pathetic lives, a statement that Fortune refuses to slap another disgusting, only god knows where it's been hand. The attack on Ted was to establish that we are here, and that we're not going anywhere, nor will we tolerate anyone getting in our way. The same, however, could not be said for the nWo, no, their intentions were clear from the beginning, to once again hog all the spotlight from the people that far exceed anything they ever were or could be, people like Kazarian and myself.
{AJ Styles} Tonight I face a man who I have yet to face in my time here in XWL, Alex Shelley. Alex, I used to be just like you, thriving on the cheers of these people. That was until I was betrayed by them, just like you will be. One second they chant your name, the next they begin booing you because you do something that you cannot control. All it takes is one wrong move and they will toss you aside like they have done with Fortune. With that being said, Alex, get ready for the fight of your life. I will not be holding back and neither should you because if you do, you will know what it's like to be phenomenal.
*AJ drops the mic to an array of boos from the crowd as his theme begins to play and exits the ring. He walks up the ramp, ignoring the still booing audience, and walks backstage to possibly prepare for his match with Alex Shelley. Breakdown goes to a commercial break.*
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Subject: Re: XWL Breakdown: 2/5/2012 - 2/12/2012 Wed Feb 08, 2012 2:09 am
X-Pac vs HHH
We return to breakdown, and we're set for what's sure to be an exciting matchup. X-Pac who last weeked shocked alot of people. When he put on the White & Black. Dawning a new nWo era. HHH coming off a tuff matchup vs Undertaker. Who will climb up the XWL ladder. We go to the ring now for introductions.
HHH music fills the arena. . . .
The GAME makes his way to the ring. He stands up on the apron, and gives his classic water spray to the crowd.
HHH steps into the ring, and begins pacing back and forth. Suddenly X-Pac's nWo music begins. . . .
X-Pac comes out from behind the curtain, wearing a huge grin. Then Hogan, Hall, and Nash step out from behind the curtain as well.
Hunter's look changes, as he begins to look worried.
[Cole] This can't be good. We're scheduled to have X-Pac vs HHH, no reason those thugs should be out here. Anywhere you see nWo. You know trouble is soon to follow.
X-Pac steps into the ring. As the rest surround it. HHH begins looking around, very anxiously. He clinches his fist, puts them up, and starts looking around rapidly at all of nWo.
The bell sounds, and HHH does not move. He is anticipating a brutal attack. X-Pac begins to inch closer, and closer to Hunter.
HHH turns his focus onto X-Pac. They circle eachother and prepare for war.
Just then Hogan gives Hall, and Nash a signal, and all 3 get up on the apron. . . . . . . .
Suddenly HHH looks to be going in for the lockup. When he "POKES" X-Pac. X-Pac falls to the ground like he has just been shot. Hunter looks at Hogan, and goes for the pin
1....2.....3!
{{ Justin Roberts (ring announcer) }} Here is your winner......Triple H!
[Cole] What in the hell! Don't tell me........No it isn't true...It can't be. HHH has joined the nWo??? Once again the "finger poke of doom" has struck. GIFSoup
[Cole] We were prepared for an exciting matchup, and we get this scam! This was planned all along. No wonder nWo wore such big smiles on the way to the ring.
nWo fills the ring. X-Pac gets up, and begins to laugh. HHH then gives X-Pac the nWo 2 sweet finger touch. Hogan then demands a microphone.
[Hogan] I hope you understand just how powerful the letters nWo are. We're back in black, and the nWo is running wild. See our friend HHH has known all of us along time. So naturally when the nWo reformed. We had a small list of who actually fit the nWo mold. And brother everyone in this ring is a perfect fit for the Black&White. The fun does not stop here. Everyone in the back better realize real quick. That we are stronger then ever, and we will dominate.
GIFSoup
Hogan steps in the middle of the ring, as the rest lineup on each side of him. They all raise up the 2 sweet sign, as the camera fades out for a quick break.
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Subject: Re: XWL Breakdown: 2/5/2012 - 2/12/2012 Wed Feb 08, 2012 6:53 am
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Subject: Re: XWL Breakdown: 2/5/2012 - 2/12/2012 Wed Feb 08, 2012 8:31 am
anyone like my writeup/promo?
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Subject: Re: XWL Breakdown: 2/5/2012 - 2/12/2012 Wed Feb 08, 2012 9:06 am
It was okay. But my worry is that people are getting added to the nWo really quickly. Stables never last here,especially when they have quite a few members. Personally I liked the idea of the original nWo we had because that had potential to last.So to keep adding to that could lead to it's downfall.
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Subject: Re: XWL Breakdown: 2/5/2012 - 2/12/2012 Wed Feb 08, 2012 9:08 am
The Capetown Werewolf wrote:
It was okay. But my worry is that people are getting added to the nWo really quickly. Stables never last here,especially when they have quite a few members. Personally I liked the idea of the original nWo we had because that had potential to last.So to keep adding to that could lead to it's downfall.
This.
Plus don't re-use material, stuff like the finger poke of doom especially because it was terrible in real life to start with, the fact that the same people are included make it worse. If I copy and pasted a Rock or Truth promo no one would laugh or want to read, it's like when Zack copied the Punk shoot, pointless. Take the time to think of some ideas at least.
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Subject: Re: XWL Breakdown: 2/5/2012 - 2/12/2012 Wed Feb 08, 2012 9:36 am
Zander wrote:
The Capetown Werewolf wrote:
It was okay. But my worry is that people are getting added to the nWo really quickly. Stables never last here,especially when they have quite a few members. Personally I liked the idea of the original nWo we had because that had potential to last.So to keep adding to that could lead to it's downfall.
This.
Plus don't re-use material, stuff like the finger poke of doom especially because it was terrible in real life to start with, the fact that the same people are included make it worse. If I copy and pasted a Rock or Truth promo no one would laugh or want to read, it's like when Zack copied the Punk shoot, pointless. Take the time to think of some ideas at least.
Also if you decide to keep adding more members: 1. Make the promo longer, having someone join the nWo and not saying a thing is kind of pointless. 2. Hall and Nash haven't spoke in any of these recruiting promos, just seems weird how they're kind of just viewed as just being around and not having any relevance. 3. Triple H hasn't exactly been active, he's done one promo when he joined and that's it. There's no point of having people in a group that don't add anything.
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Subject: Re: XWL Breakdown: 2/5/2012 - 2/12/2012 Wed Feb 08, 2012 9:38 am
Thunder Gun wrote:
Zander wrote:
The Capetown Werewolf wrote:
It was okay. But my worry is that people are getting added to the nWo really quickly. Stables never last here,especially when they have quite a few members. Personally I liked the idea of the original nWo we had because that had potential to last.So to keep adding to that could lead to it's downfall.
This.
Plus don't re-use material, stuff like the finger poke of doom especially because it was terrible in real life to start with, the fact that the same people are included make it worse. If I copy and pasted a Rock or Truth promo no one would laugh or want to read, it's like when Zack copied the Punk shoot, pointless. Take the time to think of some ideas at least.
Also if you decide to keep adding more members: 1. Make the promo longer, having someone join the nWo and not saying a thing is kind of pointless. 2. Hall and Nash haven't spoke in any of these recruiting promos, just seems weird how they're kind of just viewed as just being around and not having any relevance. 3. Triple H hasn't exactly been active, he's done one promo when he joined and that's it. There's no point of having people in a group that don't add anything.
I PM'd him something similar to this:
You're improving, slowly, but surely. If you want I could help you sometimes if you send me promos to read before you post and stuff. Also, don't rush posting anything, take your time and work on your promo, format it nicely and make sure you cover all bases on everything there is to talk about, throw in some jokes, trash talk etc.
For instance, my promos are always written like:
-Theme -Entrance -Paragraph of speech -Picture -Paragraph of speech -Picture -Paragraph of speech -Picture -Paragraph of speech -Picture -Paragraph of speech -Picture -Closing line
For your NWO stuff, make sure you get all members to talk, it's hard to take the group as a threat when only one of you types one paragraph, what I suggest for your next promo is to get all of you guys in the ring together and:
-State your plans for the future -Trash superstars (call The Rock a Jabroni etc, slate his in ring skills) -Talk about tonight's matches
and you will start to see a big change in the length of your promos, people will take it as a real threat and more and more people will challenge the NWO.
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Subject: Re: XWL Breakdown: 2/5/2012 - 2/12/2012 Wed Feb 08, 2012 10:10 am
Lucky Cannon to return and join NWO
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As the cameras head backstage we are taken to a interview room with what looks to be a new interviewer and Joey Ryan stoodby marking his debut at Breakdown
Interviewer Jo-
The interviewer is immediately cut off by Joey as he looks around smiling
Joey Ryan Scott, Scott, Scott, do you know why I asked you here? This is a special week for XWL. This is a week where XWL makes history. This is a week where the ratings will shoot through the roof because finally, finally Joey Ryan is at Breakdown and is going to bring sleazy back into this stuck up soap opera you call a wrestling company. What better place for me to make my debut other than the one, the only the great city of Los Angeles California the home of Joey Ryan! This means that tonight I am going to be going and performing in front of my people. I’m getting interviewed right now by one of my people. You all love Joey Ryan but at the same time you all can’t stand Joey Ryan because I’m just that damn better than you. I am the man who is going to teach you all how to sit back, drink a shake in an 80’s diner while smoking a cigarette and still pick up any chick I want because that’s just how I roll.
Joey Ryan Tonight here in LA I am going to show everyone just a taste of sleazy and I am definitely not going to fall into the trap many wrestlers have fallen into and that is to fall into the drama. I am here to wrestle and just be that damn good. I am here to win titles and I am here most importantly to accomplish my main goal and that is to be the man to make a change, to be the man who will go down in the history books forever as the sleaziest man in history and the man who make professional wrestling cool again. I’ve been for a tour and looked in the locker rooms and the first things I saw when I looked into everyones eyes were fear, they were scared of me and I could see it and hey who blames them. I have always being at the top of the food chain and I have always had men trying to get a piece of Joey Ryan, hell Scott I can even see in your eyes that you want a piece of Joey Ryan….loser.
Scott Well Joey I don’t want a piece of you and when I was contacted to give you this interview I was expecting to ask you some questions, so before I get interrupted again tonight you are making your debut against Sin Cara, what do you think of him? Are you nervous? Do you think you will get a win in your debut match?
Joey Ryan What is this 20 questions? Chill down man we have all day, when Joey Ryan is on the camera’s just keep rolling so unlike some of the low card wannabe wrestlers who get 30 seconds flat Joey Ryan gets unlimited time so take your time, don’t rush on the questions but as for Sin Cara he was meant to be great in Mexico but when he came across the border over to the US this is a whole different game and tonight I am going to show him Joey Ryan means business here. I may have exceptionally good lucks and unique rockstar charisma and I know people say you can’t have everything but I am the exception. Joey Ryan has everything, I am the total package. Now when I was originally booked 2 weeks ago it was against a joke of a superstar who shouldn’t even be allowed to step inside a wrestling ring. Tonight is no other Sin Cara is going to know not to mess with Joey Ryan and tonight everyone is going to be getting a lesson in sleazy. Tonight Sin Cara goes….for a moustache ride.
Joey Ryan Am I feeling nervous? Hell no Joey Ryan is never nervous because when I wrestle I don’t lose. I am going to prove to the world that Sin Cara who was a pathetic excuse for an Xtreme Champion anyway did not only not deserve to be a champion but does not even deserve a contract with a company like XWL. Am I feeling nervous? What do you think Scott? Do I look nervous? I am not a nervous man Scott, as I said earlier I thrive off people wanting fights against me, I thrive off beating the lower superstars because I am going to be a top superstar here and in the end you see that nice opening intro? Once I am doing with it, it is going to be Rated S, sleazy. Not only is the intro going to change but after I become the biggest, highest paid, top named superstar in this company you may aswell just get ready to call XWL Breakdown the sleaziest show on television. Got any more questions scotty boy?
Scott Joey you’re a pretty cocky guy, how do you think you are going to fit in not only with the other superstars and divas but with the crowds aswell?
Joey Ryan Scott I’m not a cocky guy, this is me. I am a man who some say I have an ego but I call it a personality. If I wasn’t for people like me this world would be a boring place. You all NEED people like me to make stuff fun again, I not only bring fun and excitement but I also bring atmosphere. Now I don’t care what the other superstars think of me because Joey Ryan only thinks about two things, being sleazy and Joey Ryan so they can all think what they want and get in a long line because I will fight each last one of ‘em. Now with the divas, that’s a different story, I have travelled all over the world and had plenty of nights with many girls, I’m just irresistible. I know it and they do., I’ve already had a few cheeky stares from a few of the divas so I think they are going to love Joey Ryan just as much as you Scott….you freak.
Scott Sorry what?
Joey Ryan Oh what? I was just going on to say how I will be bringing sleazy back and when you talk about the fans? The fans are going to need adjusting, I am going to have to change their ways and change them into better people. Fortunately we are in a good city tonight one which I know I have influenced with sleaziness before, so I know that tonight I don’t have to give much but a small recap but I am going to make sure I go out their and just smoke, steal a kid’s shake and more importantly, look at girls. You can’t beat a girl from LA. But anyway Scott you’re beginning to bore me now, tonight just sit in my locker room and watch what I do to Sin Cara, I am going to show all of you wrestlers who are in the back just watching this how to wrestling and one by one you will all go for a moustache ride…
Joey looks away from the camera smiling to himself before looking around towards Scott
Scott Erm Joey?
Joey dosen’t respond and just walks away leaving Scott stood looking slightly confused as the camera fades to ringside where the next segment continues on.
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It was okay. But my worry is that people are getting added to the nWo really quickly. Stables never last here,especially when they have quite a few members. Personally I liked the idea of the original nWo we had because that had potential to last.So to keep adding to that could lead to it's downfall.
This.
Plus don't re-use material, stuff like the finger poke of doom especially because it was terrible in real life to start with, the fact that the same people are included make it worse. If I copy and pasted a Rock or Truth promo no one would laugh or want to read, it's like when Zack copied the Punk shoot, pointless. Take the time to think of some ideas at least.
Also if you decide to keep adding more members: 1. Make the promo longer, having someone join the nWo and not saying a thing is kind of pointless. 2. Hall and Nash haven't spoke in any of these recruiting promos, just seems weird how they're kind of just viewed as just being around and not having any relevance. 3. Triple H hasn't exactly been active, he's done one promo when he joined and that's it. There's no point of having people in a group that don't add anything.
I PM'd him something similar to this:
You're improving, slowly, but surely. If you want I could help you sometimes if you send me promos to read before you post and stuff. Also, don't rush posting anything, take your time and work on your promo, format it nicely and make sure you cover all bases on everything there is to talk about, throw in some jokes, trash talk etc.
For instance, my promos are always written like:
-Theme -Entrance -Paragraph of speech -Picture -Paragraph of speech -Picture -Paragraph of speech -Picture -Paragraph of speech -Picture -Paragraph of speech -Picture -Closing line
For your NWO stuff, make sure you get all members to talk, it's hard to take the group as a threat when only one of you types one paragraph, what I suggest for your next promo is to get all of you guys in the ring together and:
-State your plans for the future -Trash superstars (call The Rock a Jabroni etc, slate his in ring skills) -Talk about tonight's matches
and you will start to see a big change in the length of your promos, people will take it as a real threat and more and more people will challenge the NWO.
well we didn't wanna just have boring hand some1 a shirt and they're in so with finger poke. least it looks as if we'd planned it all along
I see alot of people using real wwe history for their characters. catchphrases etc. The promo woulda been longer, but we need to get everyone together, andI don't hear from hall or nash. You guys need to be on more, and talk with us
Subject: XWL Breakdown: 2/5/2012 - 2/12/2012 
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