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What a great show so far.
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Michael Cole: Welcome to Redemption, #bansteenban.
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Alans review fuck yeah

Opening promo:

Words couldn't describe it, the epic promo I'd usually only hope could open Redemption, keep it up! 5 stars!
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no Dean?
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no Dean?

My bad forgot to add your pic to the roster so we didn't remember to book him. If you can catch

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online then you can face him this week.
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David Otunga, add me on XBL and I'll try get on as much as I can to catch you on.
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I have my promo ready but I really don't want to open the show... Come on, guys.
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-After all the matches are shown on the titan-tron, the camera fades out as the opening pyro goes off-

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-The camera goes to the announcers table, where Michael Cole and Joey Styles begin to speak-

Michael Cole

What a great night it will be on Redemption, except for the fact that I have to put up with this loser sitting beside me.

Joey Styles

Shut up, Cole, as if I wanna be here beside here anymore than you do. Anyways, tonight we have a great card, featuring a tag match between Ted DiBiase & Daniel Bryan Vs AJ Styles & Kazarian

Michael Cole

And we also have The Great Turd The Rock facing The Heartbreak Boy and United States Champion Shawn Michaels.

Joey Styles

Michael, can you please be more cheerful than your usual self?

Michael Cole

Shut up, Joey

-As Michael Cole stops there, they are interrupted by Tyson Kidd’s theme-



-Tyson Kidd begins to walk out on the stage, mic in hand, as he absorbs in the boo’s from the audience-

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-Tyson begins to speak-

Tyson Kidd

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Now…last week on XWL Redemption…I gave Rey Mysterio the ass kicking of a life time. After hitting at least 4 of my new Brainbuster finishers…he knew for a fact the he was better off staying down on the ground where any high flyers belong. See, I have a video planned out tonight, which I personally gave to XWL Production to show you all during this lecture on just how awesome I am…and I think now is the time for them to show it. Production, roll the clip!

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-The camera fades up to the titan-tron as the clip begins to roll-



-As the clip is done rolling, the camera fades back out of the video, to see a smiling Tyson Kidd looking on out to the crowd...-

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-He begins to speak again-

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Tyson Kidd

Now tonight…the gameplan is no different, go out to that very ring later on, and show the world why I am the best high flyer, submission specialist, and ground grappler that this whole company has ever seen. Tonight…I prove to the whole world that I know what Stu Hart and the legendary Bret Hart have trained me at the Hart Dungeon. And people…if you think your jobs or your training is tough…you haven’t seen the Hart Dungeon. 12 hour day, 6 days a week, all year long. But…it is all worth while…trust me when I say that…

-Tyson takes a break, before speaking again-

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Tyson Kidd

Now…let me go through the reasons that Alex Riley will not defeat me here tonight…Reason number 1. I have more high flying ability than he has trustworthy skills. I can springboard off of these ropes and crash down right on top of you if I really wanted to…Reason number 2. I have more experience than you. Coming straight out of the Hart Dungeon, then signing with the “other company” back in November of 2006.

-The camera fades out, only to show that Tyson has the reasons counted out on his fingers-

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-He begins again-

Tyson Kidd

Reason number 3. I can make you tap out anytime, anyplace, anywhere. All it takes is just 1 Sharpshooter, and you’re begging me to let it out, crying, and hopelessly tapping out on the ground…and finally, Reason number 4. The ground game. I can do wrestling ground moves on you this whole match…and you won’t be able to do a damn thing about it. Now…I’m all for leaving on a good note, so I’ll remind you of this, A-Ry. Watch your back, you may never know when the pink and black, will attack.

-Tyson moves the mic away froms his face, and raises out his arms as we go into a commercial break…-

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*As we return from commercial break, Curt Hawkins is seen sitting on the turnbuckle in the ring, looking around the crowd.

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*He raises the mic and begins to speak.*

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Curt Hawkins:
So, how about that super kick last week? I thought it was pretty damn fine and was a perfect example of Curt Hawkins being Shawn Michaels Version Two. What's next for me? Maybe I'll going to come out here wearing chains and chaps or there's a chance that I'm going to sing my own theme song explaining how sexy I am. I could find a pair of those glasses that hippes and Shawn Michaels once wore. You know what I'm talking about? Basically just two stupid little circles instead of overalls or rectangles, whatever. You know what I mean, right? Well if you don't then your probably one of those little kids out there who worship people like John Cena and Ted DiBiase. But who cares about them, let us go back to talking about good 'ol Shawn Michaels.

Curt Hawkins:
The Headliner! The Main Event! The Showstopper! The Washed Up Man Who Thinks He's Still 25 or whatever because he's apparently sexy. The man is 46 years old, who is "Sexy" when they are 46? There is... Ummm, I can't really think of anyone.

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Curt Hawkins:
I'm only 26 years old and I have a bright future in front of me as long as Shawn Michaels doesn't steal my spotlight which he just loves doing so I decided to give him a taste of his own message which I did last week. I kept quiet for the whole night and then I struck by hitting Sweet Chin Music on the man who innovated the Sweet Chin Music, ironic isn't it? Now you may be asking "What does Hawkins have in plan tonight?" Well you will just have to wait and see because to be honest, I have nothing planned... yet. If something comes to mind then something will happen but for now, I'm going to just lay low.

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Curt Hawkins:
Just gonna lay low and wait for my moment, wait for the moment where I can finally shut Shawn up for good. I feel like his time has passed yet he continues to rot in the spotlight which could be used by plenty of other superstars but Shawn doesn't care. He just cares about himself and it's time for someone to shove him out of the spotlight. Shove him out of the spotlight and become your new United States Champion and I can represent the land of the free and the home of too many obese people.

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Curt Hawkins:
Shawn, are you ready? Are you ready for your time to expire and my time to begin because at Over the Limit, that is just what I plan on doing. Climb the turnbuckle and jump off and hit you with my elbow, hoping you'll stay down long enough for my to become your new United... States.... Champion....

*Hawkins lowers the mic and embraces the heat the crowd is giving him.*

Curt Hawkins:
Okay, I'm sorry if I hurt the feelings of any "large" people out there but it's not my fault that you choose mcdonalds over something much better. I've had mcdonalds, it's decent but I actually care about how I look. We just had Tyson Kidd out here and I didn't listen to him at all because I could care less about what he has to say. Was some typical jobber thing like "Oh, I'm Tyson Kidd and I'm actually a good wrestler but I'm not a good enough wrestler to become United States Champion."

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Curt Hawkins:
I'm right, aren't I? Well, that's kinda sad so I'll just shut up about that now. To sum things up, I'm going to become the United States Champion. I'm going to beat Heath Slater tonight. I am going to beat Shawn Michaels at the Pay-Per-View. I am going to defend my United States Championship at Final Stand and I'm going to have a pretty damn good reign. Trust me, would you expect anything different? It's not like I'm Austin Aries, I won't lose it right after I win it. I'm going to enjoy my reign and make it damn good.

*Hawkins tosses the mic into the ring and we fade to commercial break.*
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[Redemption begins and my goodness what an intro it is. Fireworks, screaming fans music pounding in your eardrums, this is an experience you can only get from watching XWL! Before we can be taken to our commentators, the camera cuts backstage just as Chavo bursts through a set of double doors. Josh Matthews pops up outta nowhere and sticks a microphone is his face.]

[Josh Matthews]
Hey Chavo! You mad?

[ Chavo stops in his tracks and gives Matthews a look so dirty he’ll have to shower after this.
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[Chavo Guerrero]
Don’t you worry about me Matthews, because when this is all said and done I won’t be the one is grave danger. Worry about Vickie Guerrero… worry about Michael McGillicutty, because I swear when I find out what the hell is going on around here things are going to get ugly. I’m talking Brock Lesnar’s MMA career ugly. I’m talking The Rock is a tutu ugly. Vickie things that she can sick one of her pets on me and I’ll take my beating and call it a day? No, I tried to give Michael the benefit of the doubt but it’s clear that he’s been blinded by the light that shines off the fake silver on his championship belt. He’s been brainwashed, but after what he did last week, I’m not going to pity him anymore, and no one out there should feel bad for what will happen to him because he should have known better. He walks to walking around these halls pretending to be a big bad dog? Well, he’s nothing more than a scared little puppy in my eyes, but the fear in his eyes isn’t going to stop me from putting him to sleep, for good.

[Chavo walks away and the camera cuts to Michael Cole and Joey Styles at the announce table.]

[Michael Cole]
What a way to start Redemption!!

[Joey Styles]
If I was Michael McGillicutty I would be a bit cautious. After everything Chavo’s been through, these series of beat downs over the last two weeks may be the straw that breaks the camel’s back. He could be putting Chavo in a position to sacrifice his own body… his own career to take him out and get his revenge.

[Michael Cole]
What a way to start Redemption!!
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Oh, now y'all wanna open the show? I'm not even gonna edit.

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Hey Chavo! You mad?
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After the opening promo and a commercial break, the show comes back showing Portia Perez on the titantron, apparently ready to run her mouth once again, while wearing a fierce Cookie Monster hat.

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(Portia Perez)
- Hello everyone. As you may have noticced, I was pulled off from last week's show. Apparently the reason was that management was afraid I would end up seriously injuring someone after the brutal beatdown I gave Rosa Mendes. Whatever. I'm back, and this week I'm going to be defeating Michelle McCool. While I'm not worried about the outcome of this match, I gotta say that I am concerned about Michelle's well being and wheter or not she is, as she likes to say, simply flawless...

At this moment, Portia grabs a box of cookies and shows it to the audience, and after a short period of silence, she continues her speech about her adversary tonight

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(Portia Perez)
- Michelle, you probably don't know what this is, but we, food consumers, call it cookies. I'd be happy to give you one box of these anytime, because I honestly can't stand seeing the hunger in your face anymore, girl. You know what isn't flawless? Eating disorders, and showcasing a walking one in the ring is just wrong. A lot of places appreciate stick figures wrestling, but I'm sure this os not one of them. So I'll give everyone a favor and send you home after I destroy you just like I destroyed the mexican chick. Then I will probably eat a cookie or two for you.

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As Portia finishes her cookie, she adjusts her glasses position and open an ironic smile before she starts talking again, in a more serious and slow paced way.

(Portia Perez)
- You know what's funny? While you claim to be flawless, you're hiding behind hair extensions, make up and shiny outfits. Michelle McCool, tonight I'm going to give you a new example of what flawless is, when I show you what happens when a real flawless human being collides with a fake, pretentious, anorexic bitch.

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*Redemption returns with Fortune roaming the corridors of the arena Redemption is being held at this week. Both men are seen chatting amongst each other, possibly discussing a game plan for their opponents tonight, the team of Ted DiBiase and Daniel Bryan. The camera manages to move in close enough to hear them talking, seemingly stalking them.*

AJ Styles: So this is Redemption... it's been a while. The last time I was here was almost one year ago, when I got fired by Kevin Steen, now I've been reborn. The old AJ Styles, just like the hatred I had for Kevin Steen, is all in the past. It's good to be back, even if it's just for one night. Okay, enough reminiscing, time to get back to business. Last week was not a good week for Fortune, not only did I lose to Davey Richards, Kazarian, you lost to Kofi Kingston as well. It's okay though because tonight we have a chance to redeem ourselves, we are facing both Ted DiBiase and Daniel Bryan, two men that haven't teamed up in nearly a year and that works to our advantage. So tell me something Kazarian, how did you end up losing to Kofi while I was in your corner last week?

Kazarian: Me losing to Kofi was only a fluke but i guarantee that wont happen again because now I know what he is going to do, so now I can get into his head and play games. As for our tag match tonight, you are right, they haven’t teamed for awhile, they are gonna be tough competitors. Even though that may be so, tonight Ted and Daniel will both feel the wrath of my finishing maneuver, The Fade To Black. How do you feel about that AJ?

AJ Styles: As long as it gets us the win and back on the right track, you can do whatever you want. Good to know that your first loss in XWL didn't affect your mindset. Tonight we may not have the home field advantage but we do got one thing they don't, experience as a tag team. That, and that alone, should be enough for us to get the win, but unfortunately for us, that is not the case tonight. Ted is on a huge winning streak and we are going to be the ones to end it. How do you feel about that Kazarian?

Kazarian: You wanna know what I think, what I think is that tonight will be the end of the Ted's little undefeated streak. That will also put us on top of the tag team division that is what we are here for. I think that it is our time to shine, I mean we are Fortune and what we do is win. With my Fade to Black and your Styles Clash, we are unbeatable together.

*AJ and Kazarian high five each other and AJ begins to speak.*

AJ Styles: I agree with that statement. How about tonight instead of just trying to win the match, we try to pin Ted DiBiase. I'm not saying lets just forget about Daniel Bryan, no, what I'm saying we properly end his little streak by Ted being the one getting pinned, that way he won't have any excuses by saying he wasn't the one pinned in the match and that he's still undefeated. If we are in agreement, then I guess the only thing left for us to do is to decide who pins Ted.

Kazarian: I don't care who pins him because we are on the same page trying to end his streak. I mean as long as one of us pins him, he will not be undefeated. And as for Daniel Bryan he best not get in our way other wise he will be hit with the “Wave of the Future”.

AJ Styles: Alright enough talk, time to prepare for the challenge ahead.

*AJ and Kazarian continue roaming the corridors in search of their locker room. They continue walking until they are out of view and Redemption fades to black.*

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**The crowd erupts!! Showing Kidd , and Riley , that they respect them for putting on such a great match!



{Jim Ross}
what a match that was King! That is exactly what we've come to expect from the Xtreme division guys. 5 star matches , and guys leaving it all in the ring. Now you gotta wonder where this puts Alex Riley as far as Title shots go?

*Riley grabs a mic , and catches his breath before speaking.

{Riley}
Its matches like that is why i wanted to come back to XWL. I have alot of respect for alot of guys in our division. Over the last month James Storm , Santino , Drew Mcintyre , and now Tyson Kidd have all seen what "a Threat" Rarebreed Alex Riley really is. I have busted my ass for what i think is now rightfully mine. And that is just a chance. At that X-treme Championship.
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**Suddenly Drew Mcintyre appears. He turns Riley around mid sentence , and hits him with the "Future Shock".


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**Mcintyre doesn't stand up , instead he stays on his knees , pulls his hair back away from his face , and Reveals a sinister look upon his face.


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**Drew grabs the mic , which is laying beside an outcold Alex Riley. He stares at Riley for a second , then begins to speak.

{Drew Mcintyre}
hey alex you alright down there ?

*alex just lays there motionless on the mat

everyone this is the "rare" breed that wants a shot at the x-treme championship after 4 matches i don't think he has earned it but don't take my word for it i'll ask some of the fans here in attendance.

*Drew rolls out of the ring

you there what do you think ? does the supposed "Rare" Breed deserve a title shot ?

{fan}
well in my opinion he deserves to...

*drew cuts them off mid sentance

{Drew McIntyre}

get his face beaten in by me next redemption episode ? i couldn't agree more.

*Drew starts to make his way back to the ring

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now earlier Alex referred to the x-treme division as "our" division well i got news for Alex,Micheal what's his name and that guy in the mask. It's my division not ours mine all mine. i alone stood side by side with The Brian Kendrick and fought for a place to be recognised not you not any of them. This next part i'd like to dedicate to the members of the x-treme division i'm coming for you after i'm done with this ken doll so you'd best be prepared or don't be i'll be your downfall either way.

**Drew then exits to his theme as pramedics rush to the aid of riley







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*The camera fades out on Drew throwing his arms up in celebration. Showing the fact that he's proud of this vicious attack!


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hope you guys like it...MY 1ST FEUD PROMO....me and drew agreed that if either of us get title shot. We will find some way to break off the feud for a couple weeks or end it. this is my 1st feud , and it should be fun. I just dont know how it affects title matches , and such. Please review this. let me know how i did **sdogg50c contributed Mcintyres speaking parts , and i think he did great. so give him credit 2.
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Redemption returns and we are brought backstage where Josh Matthews is standing by

{Josh Matthews}
Ladies and Gentleman I am standing by with the man who went toe to toe with The Phenom last week on Breakdown, no not Triple H, I'm talking about Brock Lesnar!

The crowd lets off a mixed reaction as the camera pans out to show The Next Big Thing

{Josh Matthews}
It seemed like you entered the ring last night expecting to confront Triple H for whatever reason but instead ended up trading punches with The Deadman! Do you wish to further explain just what went down last week for us Brock?

{Brock Lesnar}
Last week I had no intentions of harming Triple H, I returned to this industry to prove that I'm capable of being the best and in order to prove that I realized that I'm going to have to make an example out of someone and lets face it, Hunter has grown too soft as of late, he wouldn't be able to handle the pain I'm capable of dealing out to my victims. The way I see it there's only one man who can truly stand face to face with me in the ring, or as he likes to call it his "yard", only one man I truly respect enough to want to test my skills against, only one man, and I say man because he's nothing more than a man, everyone thinks that just because he has come back from the dead multiple times that he's more powerful then anyone else but the fact of the matter is that I wouldn't get buried in the first place to have to come back from the dead, obviously I'm talking about The Undertaker, The Deadman, The "Top Dog" of the XWL.. well I'm going to put him down like a dog the next chance I get, I'm going to prove that I'm tougher than The Undertaker, that I'm the better man.

{Josh Matthews}
And when do you think the next chance will be?

{Brock Lesnar}
I'm a fighter not a psychic Josh, I can't read the future. Tonight I'm here on Redemption and he's on Breakdown, but next week? Well you never know.

{Josh Matthews}
Do you really think that you can defeat The Undertaker though? I mean, Ted DiBiase buried him alive and look what good that did!

{Brock Lesnar}
You're right Josh, The Undertaker seems to be an unbeatable opponent, but that's the reason that I choose him as my target, as my example, I'm going to defeat the undefeatable, I'm the only man capable of making The Undertaker truly... Rest in Peace!

Josh opens his mouth to ask another question but Brock has already turned his back on him and begins to walk away as Josh speaks to the camera

{Josh Matthews}
Well ladies and gentleman, that was Brock Lesnar, he may be a man of little words but he makes up for it in the ring with his freakish size and strength! Be sure to catch him in action for the first time since his return tonight against Chavo Guerrero!

We fade off to a video for the main event
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A-Rarebreed-Riley wrote:

hope you guys like it...MY 1ST FEUD PROMO....me and drew agreed that if either of us get title shot. We will find some way to break off the feud for a couple weeks or end it. this is my 1st feud , and it should be fun. I just dont know how it affects title matches , and such. Please review this. let me know how i did **sdogg50c contributed Mcintyres speaking parts , and i think he did great. so give him credit 2.
It was good; only flaws are some grammar and the placement should've told coolvikings to wait to post till you sent him that segment or post it with the drew maybe have drew call Riley out or something so it goes together all in one post. Also in the x-treme division unless while I was gone it changed the champion has to defend his title every other week if there's a challenger unless under specific circumstances.
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Any thoughts on my promo? I know it's still the same backstage thing I did before but I'd really like to know if I'm improving and whatnot.
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Only problem for me personally and I hadn't read yours fully just skimmed it but the formatting. I feel talking should just be white and the outside stuff setting the scene or mood should be in a different color but that's just me, but youre doing good!
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