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slickrick
New Talent
Posts : 19
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Join date : 2014-09-23
Age : 40
|  Subject: how was my promo  Mon Sep 29, 2014 3:08 am | |
| how did you guys find it? anything i need to work on? | |
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Dash
Upper Mid Card
Posts : 588
Likes : 2
Join date : 2012-12-02
| | Subject: Re: how was my promo Mon Sep 29, 2014 7:24 am | |
| Well, coming into the league and saying you're going after the US championship is never a good way to start your career. You've been here less than a day technically, so you're nowhere near a United States Championship shot. | |
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slickrick
New Talent
Posts : 19
Likes : 0
Join date : 2014-09-23
Age : 40
| | Subject: Re: how was my promo Mon Sep 29, 2014 7:30 am | |
| i was not demanding a title shot it was more just a way to show the admins or the bookers what title when i get my shot i am interested in. | |
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slickrick
New Talent
Posts : 19
Likes : 0
Join date : 2014-09-23
Age : 40
| | Subject: Re: how was my promo Mon Sep 29, 2014 7:30 am | |
| I also was not expecting a title shot anytime soon | |
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Jimmy
Mid Card
Posts : 213
Likes : 0
Join date : 2014-06-07
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: how was my promo Mon Sep 29, 2014 7:53 am | |
| I sort of Did the same thing when I first came. It's not really demanding a title match it's like this is the title I'm going to work to capture. The promo was a bit short and too the point, you didn't really capture the rocks spark I know it's hard to do that's why I dropped him. Formating could use some work. It wasn't the best but it wasn't the word. I used to not know How to do should when it came to promos but practice and ask the admins ABS you'll be good to good in like a month. | |
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Kyle
Main Eventer
Posts : 2100
Likes : 9
Join date : 2011-01-20
Age : 36
Location : Mansfield, OH
| | Subject: Re: how was my promo Mon Sep 29, 2014 8:29 am | |
| For how long it was I don't think it was bad. You captured him okay, but, I would advise to study him a bit more. Maybe look at some of his history here. Also, this is just a small thing but, when I got to the part of him being here in xwl having it read "the xwl" just doesn't make sense to me and it never has. A few other people do that and every time I read that back it just doesn't look right. It'd be better if it just said xwl by taking out the the. Other than that I enjoyed it but keep working at it. | |
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slickrick
New Talent
Posts : 19
Likes : 0
Join date : 2014-09-23
Age : 40
| | Subject: Re: how was my promo Mon Sep 29, 2014 8:38 am | |
| yeah I know i really tried my best and yeah kyle I did'nt know if i was suppose to use his wwe stats or his xwl stats just out of curiosity is there a page i can look at to see his xwl stats? | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: how was my promo Mon Sep 29, 2014 9:40 am | |
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Kyle
Main Eventer
Posts : 2100
Likes : 9
Join date : 2011-01-20
Age : 36
Location : Mansfield, OH
| | Subject: Re: how was my promo Mon Sep 29, 2014 11:21 am | |
| - slickrick wrote:
- yeah I know i really tried my best and yeah kyle I did'nt know if i was suppose to use his wwe stats or his xwl stats just out of curiosity is there a page i can look at to see his xwl stats?
I've always mainly went with XWL, but, there are times when I like to play around with it and say things like I was a champion at this company but that's nothing compared to here etc. So just have fun with it and play around with things. I'd mainly go off here though and use what Gregg linked as reference. | |
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